First Draft
This is our first draft of our trailer, it is not complete and has many blank gaps, this is due to the group deciding to tweak our story line. We have decided to do this as there was no vulnerable victim that we could focus from.
In order to make progress we need to make improvements, which is why we asked for feedback to see what our audience thought about it. Here are a few comments we received:
(Tom Harvey, Abbey Mustoe, James Weir, Tessa Walsh)